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Heather Mayer
4th Grade Writing Teacher
Seele Elementary
hmayer@nbisd.org

Wednesday, August 6, 2014

Locked Door

Imagine...

You pass a door every day. It is always locked. One day you pass the door it is unlocked. You open the door and walk inside. Write to tell what happens when you open the door and walk inside.

7 comments:

  1. When I opened the door that was finally unlocked I saw lots of stuff. It was full of gold. When I opened another door I saw lots of of cakes, cookies and candies. I also saw an underground space that was stored with books, all types of books and a desk and computer. I was rich. It was amazing.

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  2. When I walk in the door, I saw my house. I said, "that’s a little creepy." I walked upstairs and I saw my bed. When I went to the next room I saw our Ping-Pong table. I went back down stairs to the backyard and I saw my playground and dogs. When I went to the pantry I saw all the things that were in my pantry. The living room had all my furniture in it. It looked exactly like my house and I was getting kind of freaked out.
    Just then a woman who looks exactly like my sister walked in and said “ what are you doing in my house, girl.”
    “I,I,I,I saw that your door was unlocked so I was curious and came in. This looks exactly like my house but with a different address.”
    Then woman said “ you caught me, I look inside peoples houses each month and buy all the same furniture as them. “
    I said “ I knew I saw someone outside my window.”
    I ran back to my house and I never opened an unlocked door without an adult ever again.

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  3. When I saw the door unlocked I opened the door, I saw a portal. So,I looked around went into the portal. When I opened my eyes, I saw a castle. It looked very familiar. It was Cinderella's castle! so I ran up to the front door and knocked. Then, I saw Cinderella and she invited me in for tea and then we lived happily ever after. THE END!

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  4. There is a closet door in my house that is always locked. I was passing by it one day and the closet door was opened. I went inside to look at it, and there was a chute. I peered down the chute but accidentally fell in. It didn't go very far. It led to a beautiful garden. A girl about my age was in the garden. She asked me how I got here and I told her my story. Then the girl gave me a glass of water with mint in it and we sat down on a patch soft grass. She told me her name. It was Hannah. I asked Hannah how to get out so she showed me a door. We made plans to meet each other tomorrow. Hannah gave me a key and I left.

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  5. When I opened the door I saw a huge statue. The statue was shaped like a spider as I walked up to the "statue" I saw its eye move then I touched it and it ran to me! I got so scared I did not know what to do. I just stood there frozen, until it stopped. After it stopped I fell through the floor and landed on my bed.

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  6. One day, I opened an unlocked door to an old abandoned warehouse. Inside there was a chest covered in dust. I opened the chest and found a ton of gold coins! On each coin there was a picture of a pirate. Then, I said to myself, "how did these get here and where did they come from?" Then a parrot flew in through the window, landed on my shoulder and said, "Polly want a cracker?" All of a sudden I heard a knock at the door. I got really scared so I jumped inside the chest. Then I heard the door open and I open the chest to peek out and I found kids dressed in costumes singing trick or treat.

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  7. One day I went into the door. It was really cold. Then I saw some snow! And then I saw a fairy. She took me to her house so I could warm up. Then we had a great time.

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